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  1. montresor

    montresor TPF Noob!

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    ...deciding between composition and information!

    Bookstore 002 (a crop of the original) strikes me as better for composition -- main figure a little off center, eye drawn equally toward magazine rack; Bookstore 001 (the original) gives more information about the setting, which is not uninteresting for its own qualities, though compositionally it seems busy, and I'm not sure about the bald guy being dead center.

    Thoughts?

    http://s162.photobucket.com/albums/t280/rapid-omega/?action=view&current=bookstore002.jpg

    http://s162.photobucket.com/albums/t280/rapid-omega/?action=view&current=bookstore001.jpg
     
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    i like bookstore002 better in terms of composition...bookstore001 gives me a feeling that the outside of the bookstore is the focus.....bookstore002 is more of the inside.....just a thought
     

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