"He won't do that again"

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  1. JasonLambert

    JasonLambert TPF Noob!

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    "He won't do that again"

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    EDIT: Old image deleted from flickr. Here is the final update.

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    Whatd you do to her?! Lol
     
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    Staging a shoot I hope, lmao.

    It looks too nice for the subject matter IMO, maybe go gritty and raw.
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    Nothing like a couple rounds of .380 to make a guy see the error of his ways...right?
     
  5. JasonLambert

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    I edited this on my laptop... Does the bruise on her eye and the gun show up fine? It's supposed to be dark but I hope it's not too dark.
     
  6. JasonLambert

    JasonLambert TPF Noob!

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    Here is another edit I did.

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    EDIT: This edit has been deleted from flickr. Here is the final version.

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  7. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    New edit works better, as in the first version the gun did disappear in the darkness.

    And since you're still around to actually POST these photos, I am now CONVINCED it is only a staged photo ;) ;) ;).
     
  8. JasonLambert

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    I may just be his... MY wife posting as if I were him... ME!
     
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    Original is too dark. Gun disappears (though still a bit visible) and the bruise just looks like a shadow under the eye. New one is much better. Nice work!
     
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    Too dark. Needs highlights on gun.
     
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    the edit looks better... damn that photo gave me chills
     
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    I kind of like the first one. It's almost as if the
    candle is the only light in the room, and it makes
    me really look hard at the picture. The 2nd pic looks
    like the sun is beaming in through a window, so why
    would there be a lit candle? I like the concept, nice
    shot man.
     

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