Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by WilliamH, Feb 17, 2010.
This is one of my first attempts at portraiture. Critiques are more than welcome.
I like it but im no photography pro.
What im more interested in is her tattoos! They look great.
ditch the drink and the straw
Overall, pretty good job.
Few points to lookout for are straw/cup as was mentioned above, u cut her head - i have mixed feelings AGAIN but you cut her ear - I don't like that a BIT.
Now, keep in mind few little things - PRINT. If you're print a 4x6 might not be a problem but 4x5 won't come out b/c you framed too tight.
Being a total noob, but trying to learn...
for some reason the first thing I concentrated on was the few stray hairs on her forehead. I found that distracting... then the straw.
Great subject, nice pose methinks...
Very good reply.
Shutter speed is too slow for the focal length used giving you a soft image, which is a shame because she has nice eyes, get them in focus
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