Healing field. any thoughts

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  1. Cole_Alex

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    Here is a pic I took using my Cannon A1 at the Findlay Healing Field. Let me know what you think.

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    I just had this print blown up to 11x14 and framed it.

    Alex
     
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    Overall, very nice. Lots of emotion in this photo. Only little minor things I could comment on-- I'd burn down that hotspot from the sun just a little bit, so it's still bright, but not so glaring. Also overall it's just a tiny bit dark. Maybe bring up the brightness a hair, then slightly increase saturation (or maybe contrast) to compensate for that.
     
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    Thanks for your feedback. I do agree with what you have stated. I just wanted to post from the camera photo cause I shot it with film. I feel that what I shoot from film I should leave the way it is so I forces me to learn to shoot better and not just plan to alwase correct on computer. I don't develop my own film so I don't have control of darkroom manipulation so I just try to use it as a learning curve.

    Thanks again for the feedback. PS I framed this one 11x14 as a gift to my very patreotic(errr spelling) grandmother.....she loved it.

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