heineken Good anywhere

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  1. mpdc

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    Pretty spooky pic, looks like it was taken in a haunted house or something. For critique I think that it would help if the whole bottle were in the pic if that's what you were focusing on. Also if it weren't so centered that would help it too...and it's very busy. There are so many things in the pic to look at that it's confusing for the eye. It does provide good movement, but just a bit much.
     
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    Yep, I'd try cropping the right side off, just to see how it looks
     
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    I thought about b/w, but what do you think?


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  5. mpdc

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    [​IMG] Just a try
     
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    perferred the second to the first...
    perhaps the color is too much and you could make it into B&W? and see how the effect turns out? just a suggestion...
     
  7. mpdc

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    Agrea with ya about the second and the color.
    Much darker.
    B&W, thats an idea.
    Thanks
     
  8. Reservist

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    dude just remind me not to drink any beer at your house???? ;)
    Never know where it's been......
     
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    oh no, not heineken. It reminds me of saturday night! I had 7 of those babies in 1 hr along with 2 carlings and 2 alcopops(nope no idea either!)

    Man i was hammered. (shudders)
     
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    I'm wonderin' why this photograph was made. Makes it difficult to critique.
     
  11. mpdc

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    REally?
    Ill set the scene for ya. AM, been drinking since 11PM, New camera that cost a little bit of cash. Wife not talking to you because of some marital issues...

    Does it help?
     
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    Oh, yeah... thanks for sharing.

    In light of that, I would say this was an EXCELLENT use of time. I can really imagine myself doin' the same!
     

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