hello everyone C&C please

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  1. gehra

    gehra TPF Noob!

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    yes, I too have recently been bit by the bug. Here are some of my first shots with my new SLR I just got. And thank you for any feedback, I look forward to learning more from all of you

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  2. Samanax

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    #1 - Seems kinda lifeless...could use more color saturation. The diagonal of the grass is helping to keep this from being a totally boring image.

    #2 - Neat idea but you shouldn't have cut off the bottom of the wooden railing. DOF could have been a little deeper too or the focus could have been on the very end of the railing.

    #3 - Looks soft.

    #4 - When taking pictures of children it's better to get down and shoot from their eye level.
     
  3. Dylan-Fishman

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    #3 is a nice shot. I'd crop it a lot tighter.

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    Ehh. maybe not.
     
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    Not bad. I like the composition and use of depth of field in photograph #2.
     
  6. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    No, it's not.
    :roll:
     
  7. Dylan-Fishman

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    Not in every situation. This picture would benefit from having his whole head in the frame IMO of course.
     
  8. gehra

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    well thanks everyone
     
  9. Chadfehr

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    into first and second one.
     

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