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And she needed to adjust the swimsuit bottom due to the way she's turned, as well as the straps to the top, they're all twisted. It looks like you need to see everything in the viewfinder before you release the shutter.
And she needed to adjust the swimsuit bottom due to the way she's turned, as well as the straps to the top, they're all twisted. It looks like you need to see everything in the viewfinder before you release the shutter.
Somehow you always find a way to be snarky. Anyways... thank you everyone for the feedback. I noticed the straps while editing and was instantly disappointed, but I think it's a decent image nevertheless.
Oh come on man.... put on your big-boy panties. That's not being snarky, but objectively telling you what's needed for improvement. I'll take it one step further and say that you need to look at the whole scene and check for issues before you even pick up the camera. That said, none of us are perfect and we all miss things. I recently did a session for a client and was all ready to pack it in when he noticed that his colour was a little skewed; about the same impact to the image as your twisted straps here. It was minor, but it was an issue, and I had missed it completely.And she needed to adjust the swimsuit bottom due to the way she's turned, as well as the straps to the top, they're all twisted. It looks like you need to see everything in the viewfinder before you release the shutter.
Somehow you always find a way to be snarky. Anyways... thank you everyone for the feedback. I noticed the straps while editing and was instantly disappointed, but I think it's a decent image nevertheless.
tirediron said:Oh come on man.... put on your big-boy panties. That's not being snarky, but objectively telling you what's needed for improvement. I'll take it one step further and say that you need to look at the whole scene and check for issues before you even pick up the camera. That said, none of us are perfect and we all miss things. I recently did a session for a client and was all ready to pack it in when he noticed that his colour was a little skewed; about the same impact to the image as your twisted straps here. It was minor, but it was an issue, and I had missed it completely.
For me, there are just too many little details; the folded towel, missing fingertips, the way her bikini panty is sitting... when you're posing a model like this, make sure you don't let them rest on the bed/cot/whatever. While it's not bad in this case, it often causes breasts and arms to take on odd shapes. Have them use their core to support themselves, and arrange arms/legs/hands to suit. Yes, it will be uncomfortable, but... that's a model's lot in life.
I don't know what you see that's wrong with the bikini bottom. I do see the twisted straps after you mentioned it, but overall, this is not the kind of photograph that is supposed to be high fashion. Very casual. Wrinkles in the towel and twisted straps are an expected part of the overall tone of this shot.And she needed to adjust the swimsuit bottom due to the way she's turned, as well as the straps to the top, they're all twisted. It looks like you need to see everything in the viewfinder before you release the shutter.