Help a beginner out!! CC welcome

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  1. Gsurf1029

    Gsurf1029 TPF Noob!

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    so today is day two of my photo experience
    i just took this and for some reason it struck me

    critiques??
    thanks!

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    need some opinions...is there anything wrong?
    how can i improve
    thanks again guys!
     
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    NewEden TPF Noob!

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    Might be too shallow of DoF. Get more of the pepper/tomato things in focus, right now it looks like the crack is sharper then they are.

    I like the idea of the contrasts between the ground and food though. Keep it up!
     
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    Gsurf1029 TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the advice!
    that was me focusing manually so that could be the reason
     
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    Yap, the brick is sharply in focused and it look brickly yummy than the red potatos. I am brick hungry:lol:
     
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    haha ill take that into consideration next time

    check this one, im in love with the contrast. and critiques?

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