Help a beginner out!! CC welcome

[Gsurf1029]

so today is day two of my photo experience
i just took this and for some reason it struck me

critiques??
thanks!

need some opinions...is there anything wrong?
how can i improve
thanks again guys!

 

[NewEden]

Might be too shallow of DoF. Get more of the pepper/tomato things in focus, right now it looks like the crack is sharper then they are.

I like the idea of the contrasts between the ground and food though. Keep it up!

 

[Gsurf1029]

thanks for the advice!
that was me focusing manually so that could be the reason

 

[passerby]

Yap, the brick is sharply in focused and it look brickly yummy than the red potatos. I am brick hungry

 

[Gsurf1029]

haha ill take that into consideration next time

check this one, im in love with the contrast. and critiques?