[help] "Breathless Sleep"

Discussion in 'Dark Side Gallery' started by fotophia, Jan 27, 2007.

  1. fotophia

    fotophia TPF Noob!

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    I cant work out how i can imporve on it all. My head has totally died

    Any tips and opinions?

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  2. woodsac

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    The post work is pretty good. Maybe slightly darker rings around the eyes?

    What's killing it for me, is his expression. He could be dead, but he looks like he died happy :D
     
  3. Chiller

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    I agree with Woody. Maybe darken the eyes a tad, and maybe the lips a bit. Nice one tho.
     
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    fotophia TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the input, ill try it next time i get chance :)
     
  5. Arch

    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    you do a good skin job fotophia ;) ... like the others suggested, maybe a bit more around the eyes and mouth would give it more impact, good stuff :thumbup:
     

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