help editing please

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  1. pamcakes

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    i cropped this only, haven't done any other modifications.
    suggestions please?
    thanks!
     

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  2. rwebbart

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    I kinda like it as it is.....
     
  3. pamcakes

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    thanks randy....i do too, but being a newbie with an SLR i'm second guessing myself, LOL!
     
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    Im with rwebbart! As is!
     
  5. sthvtsh

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    It's very nice like this. :D No more changes.
     
  6. markc

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    It's a nice image. Personally, I'd crop a bit more off each side; the yellow on the left is distracting. I'd also shapen a bit.
     
  7. mysteryscribe

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    I started with the thought mark had did a vertical 8x10 crop... did a single sharpening and then changed the few stray colors to black. The image jumps out at you like a magazine shot. nice work
     
  8. pamcakes

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    thanks all! mysteryscribe....how can i see the changes you made? :)
     
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    my attempt...

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