her eyes

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  1. bitteraspects

    bitteraspects TPF Noob!

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    these eyes owned me for 5 years

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    this is a very personal piece for me. please critique
     
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    I can see why...

    I love the angle of the shot!
     
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    Good angle, waaaaaaay too much photoshop.
     
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    I'm not really digging the selective coloring here. I'd love to just see it as a normal B&W.
     
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    My thoughts as well :)
     
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    I also think I would like it best in B&W...I think its a nice shot though :)
     
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    bitteraspects TPF Noob!

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    the only real photoshopping was the coloring of the eyes, and the watermark. the soft focus and b&w perameter were straight out of the camera.

    thanks for the imput, please keep it coming. im gonna go look for the origional file.
     
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    i think its stunning. :)
     
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    I am not too fond of the selective coloring either. She does have nice eyes but the color against the soft B&W, almost makes her eyes look devilish, too red or something.
     
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    I agree with the no selective coloring. The focus seems off. Like you focused under her eyes.
     
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    wow ... it looks great ... I can understand you ...
     
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    Cool perspective, but yes, no selective coloring of the eyes for me either :) Focus does look off but I just checked your EXIF data (via Opanda) and your shutter was 1/30, so it is probably camera shake... you should try to keep your shutter up at least three times that, if not more. I don't like to go under 1/200 myself.
     

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