Her first time alone on the wooden swing

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  1. rufus5150

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    I'm of course biased by the subject as a whole (not just the part pictured). C&C appreciated from the non-attached folk:

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    Bump, anyone?
     
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    i like it!
     
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    Nice shot. Just might not appeal to alot of people because theres not IMEDIATE gratification looking at it. It takes a while for the title and the emotion sets in, lovely.
     
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    It needs the title, to make sense of what we're seeing.

    So once we know, the chubby little hand reaching for the wooden bar has some emotional impact.
     
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    Thanks. I think I might post it in series with other images and lose the title to add context.
     
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    I *love* this image. I'd frame it. I might change the composition jsut a tad to make the upper corner of the bar touch the rule of thirds, but I get the emotion without needign a title.
     
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    That goes for me as well. Jut seeing the picture evokes memories of my children at that age. Bravo and cherish every moment. :thumbup:
     

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