Here is a new Model shot (Might be NSFW)

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  1. SpeedTrap

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    Here is another one I am working on right now.
    As always C&C is welcome.

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    Not sure why, but her face looks fake, as if it were drawn by a sketch artist. Too much makeup maybe?

    I like the lighting and skin tones on her body though, good lighting IMO.
     
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    I agree it feels like there is too much post work done to the skin tones. I also am not a fan of the double shadow from the nose. The lighting has also generated a pair of highlights on the nose that again I don't like too much. I like the pose and that hair fits just right but I would have placed the fill closer to the camera and dropped the power a bit on it (fill) as well so there is deeper shadows the model has great bones and it is such a shame to waste them.
    I hope that helps.
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    I saw that too, but I don't think we're seeing a second shadow. That's something else.

    The ratio looks fine to me.

    Nice shot.

    -Pete
     
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    Yeah I agree.
     
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    Looks like there is too much sharpening on the eyes.
     
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    there are two problems with this shot.

    1) her hair is wider than her body.

    2) she needs to move her arm. :p
     
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    I like the light in this one. The style has potential because nothing is sexier then topless wearing Levi's.

    None the less I think it falls short because of her position and arms. Maybe if you twisted her shoulders to the lens? Post the contact sheet and we can help further.

    Love & Bass
     
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    Her face seems to hard or tight...maybe if her expression was more relaxed.
     
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    Yes indeed. Too much hair for that body.
     
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    Just to put it in perspective, this is a shot for a salon, so big hair is what they want. but I did not adjust the volume of hair, she just had alot.
     
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    Interesting. That being the case maybe an image that includes a head shot an maybe not so much of the subject's torso would work better. The image as it is now as many points of interest which may be a little distracting in my opinion.
     

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