Hi everybody, this is my first post.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by wheresyouranger, Jan 8, 2004.

  1. wheresyouranger

    wheresyouranger TPF Noob!

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    Hello everyone, im relatively new to photography in the "artistic" sense. I took this with a Kodak DX3500 digital camera. Any critisizm would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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  2. sobi

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    I like the contrasting buildings alot. I only have a beef with the fact that its sort of blurry. good eye though. :)
     
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    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    hi ya anger,
    Welcome to the forum, its good to have ya onboard here! Make sure and introduce yourself here when ya get the chance:
    http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/viewforum.php?f=19


    I would agree with sobi that i think its a bit blurry but the idea is definately there. There are lot of interesting lines and interesting geometric shapes. Do you remember the shutterspeed etc and what camera you used?

    It might help to setup tripod and try a some slow shutterspeeds to try to get a warm glow from the buildings, I think yellow and deep oranges and yellows form the background building and the lilacy colours may stand out more.

    Anyways, thanks for posting that and hope to see more pics from ya!!
     
  4. wheresyouranger

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    unfortunately this was done with a "point and shoot" digi so i couldnt really adjust anything. :| it does the job, but is kinda limited. thanks for the input though.
     
  5. MDowdey

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    welcome to the forums!!! i have that camera and it sucks A$$


    md
     
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    mrsid99 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Welcome aboard Anger and I like the composition.
    I'm guessing a tripod would fix the blur.
     
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    Welcome aboard....

    There are some interesting elements to the picture but none of them really stand out to me. Try starting with something a little less complex to really get your eye developed.

    ALso I do agree with the blurriness.
     
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    Buildings are great subjects. Keep trying. You have a natural eye for composition. Welcome to the forum.
     

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