Hide Your Beauty

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Nice shot. Something odd about the top of the eyebrow tho. Did you clone over it to neaten it up or summat - now it's too neat and the flesh colour don't quite match.
 
I like the lighting and everything, but agree the eyebrow looks weird, like it's been painted on or something
 
Yeah, the eyebrow is a bit weird... I'm not sure what happened. I think there was something odd about it that I tried to fix... it obviously didn't work... and I wasn't working in layers so it was what I had with the screwed up eyebrow or start all over.
 
Overall it's a very strong image. I'd like to see just a bit (and I mean a tiny bit) looser of a crop, especially at the bottom. The bottom edge of the frame is just a tiny bit too close to the edge of the lips. Also, it actually seems oversharpened to me. Just for comparisons' sake, I'd like to see a version with a soft-focus filter applied, and perhaps desaturated just a bit.
 

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