Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Whir, Feb 3, 2005.
Nice shot. Something odd about the top of the eyebrow tho. Did you clone over it to neaten it up or summat - now it's too neat and the flesh colour don't quite match.
I like the lighting and everything, but agree the eyebrow looks weird, like it's been painted on or something
Nice shot. I like it!
Yeah, the eyebrow is a bit weird... I'm not sure what happened. I think there was something odd about it that I tried to fix... it obviously didn't work... and I wasn't working in layers so it was what I had with the screwed up eyebrow or start all over.
Overall it's a very strong image. I'd like to see just a bit (and I mean a tiny bit) looser of a crop, especially at the bottom. The bottom edge of the frame is just a tiny bit too close to the edge of the lips. Also, it actually seems oversharpened to me. Just for comparisons' sake, I'd like to see a version with a soft-focus filter applied, and perhaps desaturated just a bit.
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