Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by vandecarr, Feb 14, 2009.
This is just one from a set from yesterday.
Personal opinion... the first ones are way too washed out. The last one is kinda creepy. Too dark overall, and... dunno. Something is not right.
These all lack directional lighting. It appears the only lighting here is an on-camera flash. Of course, the last one is low key photography.
So basically, I think you have a nice setting, subject and clothing. The posing is fairly good too.... I especially like the first and last.
You just need some shaping... some modeling... some depth.
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