Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by mox, Jul 15, 2004.
Tell me what you think !
I like the way you've used the two bridges as objects that draw the eye in but overall I think the picture is a little dark. The only other thing that bothers me is that construction over the road that looks like a large signpost (?). It takes the attention off the two bridges. I do like the pattern on the bridges though.
Great shot. If you wanted to spend some time on it, cloning out the metal signpost on the right would make it stellar.
very nice... but its a bit dark
just a little bit dark though.
a play with shadow/highlight at photoshop would help
I think this is a great shot. I like the curves and I especially like the composition. IMO, The compositional elements of progression rhythm and continuation evidenced in the side rails in the highways outway the minor distraction of that sign thing.
In fact, I even like the contrast that the lines and angles give the gentle curves.
The lighting is bothering me.... looks like a blue filter in a cloudy day.
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