HK shot of a girl in my class

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  1. MrsMoo

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    Just wanted some opinions on it :)

    was gonna post a thread with a few diff shots, but I'm too lazy to go downstairs and get my camera bag with all the stuff in it! lol!

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    nice, execpt the jacket is to distracting to me at least, a close up portrait would be nice , i think she's got some good looking eyes.
     
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    The top of her head looks over-lit, although I know nothin about lighting. Tbh, I don't like the pose that much. I don't know if she was ready for the shot but it looks like she was just about to speak when you took it.
     
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    The jacket doesn't bother me, at all. What's getting me is the softness on the face. A sharpening in LAB (200%/0.5PX/5Threshold) adds pop to it, but I'm still curious on the lighting.

    And the top down shot is cool but, bear with me hear, I don't think she has the bust line to compliment such a shot. If she does, it's not being protected or flattered here.
     
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    You might want to back off a bit on the hairlight.
     
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    yeah I think she was, but the model was happy with the pose when I showed her it
     
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    Not a bad shot but it's too soft as someone else also mentioned.
    The highlight on the back right of her head is too much. A little blown out just above the ear.
     
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    looks nice except her awkward expression
     

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