HMS Trolley (out of service)

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by captain-spanky, Sep 9, 2004.

  1. captain-spanky

    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    no photoshop fiddlin with colours or anything... trolley was very rusty and a really nice colour.
    any thoughts? :)
     
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    IMO the subject is very good but the right-side of the photo is disturbed quite a lot.
     
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    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    yeah, i wasn't sure i liked the white rock behind the blurred white rock in the foreground.. they seem to meld together a bit and cause the eye to wander the wrong way a bit...
    having said that i didn't particularly like the image with most of it cropped out... :?
     
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    I'd crop the bottom (IMO distracting) but really nice shot!
     

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