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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by enezdez, Nov 25, 2017.

  1. enezdez

    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.


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    So THAT is what it looks like. Very ugly ( not your photo, the subject ).
     
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    enezdez TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    I re-cropped, I think it's now a stronger image...

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    Yes, that definitely draws attention to the people and not the room. Good choice.
     
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    sleist Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The crop ruins the composition in my opinion.

    What the image needs is better processing. The people at the bottom are 1.5 to 2 stops under exposed making the ceiling the brightest portion of the image. Using a gradient, dodging the mid-tones, or applying curves or filters in post would all have been a better choices than cropping this and not correcting the processing.

    I applied some of these suggestions, but then saw you don't allow edits. Made a big difference - to my eyes anyway..
     

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