Holly + BMW = NSFW?

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  1. delizo23

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    a shoot for my friends BMW, but ended up being more of a hot girl shoot haha. sorry if this is NSFW, i dont think it really is? CC please.

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    oh shizzle! ill fix. sorry for the tease haha
     
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    does it work now? sorry im taking the picture off my website and theres a lock on it.
     
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    Nice work.

    I really like the first shot, except for a few things. Most people probably don't want to see the lights in the shot. I don't necessarily mind the ground/road being in the foreground, but that plant isn't helping anything. Also, your accent lights are too hot. Her highlights are blown.

    I like the 2nd one as well, but the lights are still a bit bight and her face/eyes could use more light.
     
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    i really like the first shot, like mike said, not everyone want to see the lights but i kinda like it
     
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    thanks mike, i like when getting critques from you, haha.
    i chose to put the lights in the shot because i think it gave like a glamour look. i have a bunch of other shots without the lights. also the shoot was on a small bridge. and there was no where else to put the lights.

    yeah, that stupid bush thing was in the way. i want to cut it down but i was laying on the ground and too lazy to reach over and get it out of the picture, i guess im paying for it. i wish it was on the left or right side. then it would be ok.

    yeah, i always make the back rim lights too bright for some reason. i think i like the look. i guess it makes it look more edgy, but i will try to lower it down next time i do this kind of set up.

    and for the second pic, yeah i should of put a tad bit more light.

    its hard setting up the lights all alone and in a rush. so many factors you gotta think about too, i guess thats what practice is for. ill def use this knowledge for my future shoots.

    thanks bigmike!


    thanks yeah i like the lights too, more of like a studio look.
     
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    question, what type of strobe are they? ?

    i spotted a couple of 250 watt strobe and i was wondering if there are powerfull enought for outdoor
     
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    cool shots but some skin work would go along way here. Her legs and... "area" have a little much going on (weird crotch vein that is freaking me out.)
     
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    hahahaha, yeah that vein is pretty crazy. but yeah i should have smoothened the skin. dont know how to do it! can someone guide me in smoothing skin out, other than in Lightroom using the adjustment brush. do i just mask and blur in photoshop? it never turns out the way i want it.
     

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