Holly's session

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  1. tomas24

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    Hello everybody. This is my second post in this forum. I would like to show my pictures from my first poor-strobist session. I've used only one flashgun (old and cheap one). I'am amateur. Comments welcome - be honest [​IMG]

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    I think the pictures are nice-nothing too harsh going on. I like the muted background. I just don't like how you can't really see her hair.

    I'm a noob, too, but I just didn't want you post to get buried without one single comment (I know the feeling)...
     
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    Not bad IMO i think that her um left arm should be a little darker.
     
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    is it just my monitor, is is she a bit too red??, i would cool it a bit
     
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    Yes, You all have right. I as well think that is little bit to much red (colors balance - I already taked some minus red), as well as I think that hair should be more visible. To dark background to this color of hair - maybe.

    Thanks anyway to all. Cheers.
     
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    I'm not a huge fan of the lighting, but pretty good overall
     
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    The problem with the hair is that you need it lit independently, especially against the dark backdrop, either that or light the background, basically you need more lights. H
     
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    Hi there :)

    These are underexposed and your white balance is off (too warm).
    Keep shooting, practice makes better!
     
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    no, I think she has too much foundation/fake tan on
    it makes her skin look unnaturally orange...
     
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    either the white balanace is off or the skin is off, but whatever it is she looks really warm, quite unnatural.
     

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