Holocaust Memorial REVISIT (part two)

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  1. themonko

    themonko TPF Noob!

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    Went back to the memorial over the weekend and with a few suggetions came up with a few more shots. Here is one of them:

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    Any critique and suggestions are appreciated. Thanks!
     
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    I like this one the most. it has good lighting on the face, dark background against the white statue and the dof of the barbwire keep the focus on the statue. nicely done. however, I would like see one without the flower. I'm not saying it's bad. I think with the flower the mood of the picture changed. it sends a different message - some nice person left a tribute to the memorial.
     
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    Thanks for the comment conch. to be honest, I wished the flowers weren't there as well, but didn't feel okay touching them...so I attempted to work with them. Maybe I will need to pay the memorial yet another visit? We'll see.
     

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