Holocaust Memorial

themonko · Jan 23, 2005

There is a small memorial at the Legions of Honor in SF that I wanted to capture as well as give it the proper mood. I would appreciate any feedback on these pictures:

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Thanks!

Andrea K · Jan 23, 2005

i think i like the first one the best, the color just gives it a needed depressing mood...

Alison · Jan 23, 2005

I really like the third one, the way the man is looking out through the barbed wire give it the feel you are looking for I think. Black and white was a great choice here.

sukhoon2 · Jan 23, 2005

I agree w/ andreag5; The first one reminds me of those drug commercials. The colors just send a cold chill up your spine. Great photo.

Vmann · Jan 24, 2005

The 1 and 3 are great. My only thing would be to pump up the blue a little bit in the second and crop the photo down the wooden post to make it look like he is totally enclosed behind the wire.

Great shots. A horrible trajedy needing to be remembered and you've accomblished this well.

elsaspet · Jan 24, 2005

I love the POV you chose in the last one. Superb.

JonMikal · Jan 24, 2005

what a devistating time for lots of people and you've captured the mood quite well in this memorial. i really like #3 and the b&w. :thumbup:

themonko · Jan 24, 2005

WHY WAS THIS POST MOVED??? I was looking for critique on these pictures and how to improve them.

I would appreciate if this post was moved back to CRITIQUEsection. If Ineed to post each individual picture in a seperatepost, I will dothat. (do the moderaters read everything?)

Thank you.