Holocaust Memorial

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  1. themonko

    themonko TPF Noob!

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    There is a small memorial at the Legions of Honor in SF that I wanted to capture as well as give it the proper mood. I would appreciate any feedback on these pictures:

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    Thanks!
     
  2. Andrea K

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    i think i like the first one the best, the color just gives it a needed depressing mood...
     
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    I really like the third one, the way the man is looking out through the barbed wire give it the feel you are looking for I think. Black and white was a great choice here.
     
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    I agree w/ andreag5; The first one reminds me of those drug commercials. The colors just send a cold chill up your spine. Great photo.
     
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    The 1 and 3 are great. My only thing would be to pump up the blue a little bit in the second and crop the photo down the wooden post to make it look like he is totally enclosed behind the wire.

    Great shots. A horrible trajedy needing to be remembered and you've accomblished this well.
     
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    I love the POV you chose in the last one. Superb.
     
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    what a devistating time for lots of people and you've captured the mood quite well in this memorial. i really like #3 and the b&w. :thumbup:
     
  8. themonko

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    WHY WAS THIS POST MOVED??? I was looking for critique on these pictures and how to improve them.

    I would appreciate if this post was moved back to CRITIQUEsection. If Ineed to post each individual picture in a seperatepost, I will dothat. (do the moderaters read everything?)

    Thank you.
     

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