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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by kirif1, Jan 19, 2010.

  1. kirif1

    kirif1 TPF Noob!

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    comments, crit and advice more than welcome as usual :)
    This is a lovely but very shy lady i shot two weeks ago...
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  2. kirif1

    kirif1 TPF Noob!

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    anyone?
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    I would go into the Selective Color menu in Photoshop and remove some of the green cast from the yellows. Her hair for example, has a very pronounced greenish tinge to it. He skin tones are also similarly affected.
     
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    1 & 2 very good- 3, not flattering. 4- seems like she needs a bit more light up near her face. 5.- well, speaking as a woman, I would say- break out the healing brush! Geesh! She is a beautiful woman, but no one wants to see their imperfections all hangin out. If we are going glamour, I think there is more freedom for stronger PP.

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    Aside from the comments already, I think she has a nice smile, I wish she showed it in more of these. Some of the shots, she really doesn't seem comfortable, I know you said she was shy but her face belies her pose.
     
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    #2 is fantastic. She looks the most relaxed giving a much more natural expression. Well done.
     
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    ShawnJ81 TPF Noob!

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    Great Shots. Love them
     
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    oldmacman TPF Noob!

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    I like number 4, but would like to see some detail in the solid black to break up the flatness.
     
  9. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    If she is that shy.. does she know you are putting her photos on the internet? ;)
     
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    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

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    you essentially made one big boob and blurred it.
    you went too far in PP.
     
  11. Markw

    Markw No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Agreed. She also has no belly button. o_O
     

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