Home work for commercail Ad (shoes)

Discussion in 'Commercial/Product photography' started by x-man, Jun 19, 2007.

  1. x-man

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    The following photo is my photo class home work -- Commerce ad (shoes)

    Plase give me some comment for my home work! Thank a lot! :hail:

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    I get what you're trying to do here, but I'm not quite sold on it. The shoes just don't look absolutely wonderful.

    Did you design the ad too? Is this entirely your concept?

    Pete
     
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    Hi Christie: Thank for your comment! All is my idea. So how can I improve it? Thank a lot!
     
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    no offence, but its kind of corny.......
     
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    Ya I second that
     
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    i guess i just dont really like the color of the shoes, it doesnt go too well with the roses
     
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    I'm thinking you should concentrate on making a fantastic photo of the shoes, and no so much about the ad concept. But, I do not know just what you assignment is.

    I think if you want to make a photograph of these shoes, a simple approach would be to use a background with cool colors... such as blues. Since color has different wavelengths, warm colors seem to project, while cool color recede. So, placing this warm colored product into a cool colored setting should make the shoes "pop."

    I hope this helps.

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    Hi Pete:

    Thank for your comment. You are right.I want make this photos more fantastic. Roman is fantastic. My assignment is more on concept. So that I take this photo is not normal method, using abnormal White balance. using almost same color blackground. I think I doesn't do it well. I work hard next time. Thank! ;)

    Eric Wong
     

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