Honestly what do you think ?

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  1. Maitha Mazrouei

    Maitha Mazrouei TPF Noob!

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    I used Pentax Optio 50L
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    Be critical, But Kind !!
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    Those are nice!

    You've definitely developed your own style.
     
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    Photos are inspiring in themselves, but are they for advertisement?
     
  4. Maitha Mazrouei

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    oh no !!! i took those shots without any intention . . for example i found the bottle while i was walking in the desert ( we were in trip ) and same for the sandal i was wearing it and then i fall down :lol: so yeah this was a good eye-catch . .
     
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    I like the bottle, #2. Was that a Mountain Dew bottle in the desert? Did you put it in a proper disposal bin? Oh wait, glass will eventullay break down and become one with the Earth...eventually.

    Kudoz to you for finding such an interesting subject. Bad form to the one that left it there.
     
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    the first one just isn't working for me. It just feels a bit harsh.

    number two however looks great and really grabs my attention.
     
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    I see what you're saying about the 1st one.
    The sand has a sort of moss-like texture.
    That's kind of the reason I like it though because it's unique.
     
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    Oh...................! I thought this section of the forum was for commercial and product photographs that will be used for advertising. As such, I was going to say, you can't see your product name very well at all. ;)
     
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    i dont like how the sandal sticks out into the white frame, the photo looks unfinished to me.

    I love the MD shot, i keep thinking do i like the shadow in the picture, do i not. But what the hay, i really think its creative.
     
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    Oooh...#2 is so on!
     
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    I like the one with the pastel candies...though I had trouble telling that was a wine glass they were in, just toke me a second longer. It's a bit...hard to see? Maybe either a varied background or more focus/light on foreground. Maybe thats how you wanted it to look though.
     
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    I love the second one! The first I'm not a fan of, I agree that it seems a little odd with the left portion whited out...but the second is great!

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