How am I progressing?

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  1. abnormalreply

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    I'm pretty new to photography. I know these aren't really original, but how am I doing? What do I need to work on? Thanks.

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    I think the focus is off in most of them. #1-The focus is on the stem and I think it would be better if it was on the flower/weed. #2-The focus is in the upper right hand corner. #3-The focus is on her right arm instead of the flower in her hands. #4-The slow shutter speed blurred the cards. #5-My favorite one of the bunch. Good shot! #6-Focus is on the sand in the lower right hand corner when it would have been better on the pine cone.
     
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    From the look of picture #3, you could have a wonderful model/friend there to photograph strolling through the meadows and tall grass. I'd switch to charm mode and set phasers to stun!
     
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    I haven't seen your earlier photos so I can't comment on how you are progressing, but these photos are not bad at all. I like #4 and #5 in particular.
     
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