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  1. Ghetto Panda

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    Howdy all,

    Well i took this photo a while ago now and i really like it it's actually one of my favourites but i feel it is too dark maybe i need to make the path a bit more visible and the trees and the reflection in the water on the right hand side seems like too much black should i crop that side a bit?. Well that's my thoughts so what are yours?

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    i likes!
    perhaps cropping some of the path thing off would help.i can see what you were trying but i think there might be too much pathway perhaps?
     
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    I agree on the dock portion of the photo being a bit lighter...I would say that this would have been a decent HDR photo....tough get both a visable dock and a rich in color sky.
     
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    Wha happened with the parallels of the dock planks? Lens distortion? Are the edges of the nearest planks actually curved?
     
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    The walk way actually zig zags alone the edge of a little creek i was standing right on the part before it turned too the right.
     
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    I loved this shot. But I think the tree on the left it's just a little bit to dark, still great shot!
     
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    I love it.....what a gorgeous sky!!

    My fear would be "washing out" that pretty color by trying to lighten the left side...

    I agree , maybe cropping the left and perhaps some of the bottom would make that sky "pop" even more and still not compromise that cool path.

    I think by lightening it, you would loose the mood you have
     

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