I hate mondays.

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  1. Foffen

    Foffen TPF Noob!

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    Picture shot through the window of a car just for fun. Ended up as somekind of abstract.. Do you think it's artistical?
    I'm mostly looking for general critique and tips.. :)
    Thanks for looking.

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    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    It would be more interesting if the viewer could make out a definite subject through the rainy glass. It's not that it's bad, there's just nothing there. Even an abstract will have some kind of form or pattern to hold the eye, you know? :)
     
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    I understand what you're saying, and thank you. :)
     
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    well, it's nice. but a bit too much of the subject.
     
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    The image is too big to give enough of a critique, maybe you wanna shrink it a bit
     
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    So.. I resized it.
     

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