I know, an odd mix of photo genre's, C&C pls

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  1. foned

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    Do you want the truth?

    If so, the colors are dull in #1 and the lighting is backwards in #2 and the composition is a little generic, too centered. The whites are almost blown out too.

    The line in number one above her head is odd in the way it hits her hairline directly, almost cuts the photo into two different photos. Not sure if this is a good or bad thing though..

    Someone else will chime in.

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    lol of course i want the truth, whats the point in asking for C&C and getting lies? im thick skinned..normally. I hadn't noticed the line in the first one, good catch.
     
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    Youll have to take my advice with a grain of salt most of the time, I tend to be extremely nit-picky when it comes to photography, if you cant tell. :wink:

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    haha, good i appreciate it. I want to see anything and everything that may be off so i can consider correcting it in the future. ;]
     
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    I did an edit on #1. Tell me what you think.

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    Looks a lot better, I didn't do any real PP, what all did you do?
     
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    Levels, bumped contrast, 'highlight protection' for the shorts. They got a tad blown out after bumping contrast. Color balance adjustment, and color contrast bump. I thought I made it a tad too yellow, but I think it works.

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    yea i see a little yellowing, i think its good though.
     
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    I agree with Mark on these - I like the one that has been PP'd by Mark xxx
     
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    i agree with the line above her head. it's the first thing i noticed in the shot.
     
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    thanks for the input
     

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