I need critique and advises

elis.g

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Please help me to make my self better by learning from my mistakes.
Mediterranean Doors - a set on Flickr


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This reminds me of the door into The Secret Garden. I like the composition and have little advice to offer except that i would have tuned down the exposure maybe one stop. So use a quicker shutter speed or make the aperture smaller.
 
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I like it too - a lot. I tried to lighten the shadows while bringing down the brightness of the stone, but I was in a hurry and while I like the stone better, I think I went a little overboard with the shadow lightening and now it makes my heard hurt. So take that as a lesson on what not to do. :lol:

I think the best you can probably do is go back with less harsh lighting - overcast or in the morning and you'll get better than any edit is going to do.
 
I like the composition here, doesn't distract from the main subject and a vertical framing is the right choice. However, it really lacks contrasts and needs a less harsh light. Contrasts are a must (for me at least) when showing off old and "rusty" textures, gives it a whole new depth.

My $0.02!
 

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