I need some C&C please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by nokoyo13, Jan 18, 2010.

  1. nokoyo13

    nokoyo13 TPF Noob!

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    Which one would you prefer?
    Also please point out and technical issues


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    Well your template's crap, so don't use it. Did you apply a filter or did u do it yourself ?
     
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    yeah the first one looks really bad

    the 2nd one isn'too bad, quite good, though the dark area on the bottom is distracting, other than that looks quite nice
     
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    Thank you so much for replies. Ocular, I did it myself through photoshop (first time ever trying to do something like that) but obviously it didn't become what i was expecting for :)
     
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    I like #2. The template on #1 is too much imo.

    In #2 the image looks a little too red. I see you applied a graduated filter or something on the bottom. Maybe try a vignette instead or just lose those effects and crop the picture tighter? I like the lighting on her. It feels very surreal. Like the world from the movie Willow is behind her.
     
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    What about this one?

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    That looks much better I think
     

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