i promised some of my work...

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  1. wysoczanski

    wysoczanski TPF Noob!

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    and heres some pictures i took within the last month enjoy and please critique any of it [​IMG]:D

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    hope you liked them :D
     
  2. wysoczanski

    wysoczanski TPF Noob!

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    some more

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    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Your flower shots are nicely exposed with good colour saturation, I'm just not a fan of all of them being center composed like that. Actually, even your animal pictures are all in the middle of the frame. I'd try using the rule of 3rds, diagonals and what not to get interesting perspectives.

    You definatly have the technical part of taking a picture, even though some of your birds are a bit over/under exposed, work on the composition side of things
     
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    Too many pictures.

    Most striking thing about them is the subjects are all centered in the middle of the frame. That makes them look static/boring compositionally. Check out the following link...

    Digital Photography Composition Tips

    You've got some underexposed and overexposed shots too. Check out the following link...read the first few articles on exposure.

    Digital Photography Tips For Beginners

    None of the images really stand out to me...I like the shallow DOF of the very first shot, but not crazy about the lighting or composition.

    Keep shooting.
     
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    I like frog 5 the best, he just looks like he has something on his mind
     

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