im new trying to get better some pics C&C please

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  1. classicsrtheway2go

    classicsrtheway2go TPF Noob!

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    I would crop #1 tighter. Too much sky up top. Not liking the shadow on her face either.

    2) Pretty decent.

    I like 3 better than 4 but don't really care for either really. Would have been better with a wide fast lens to get a good depth of field maybe?
     
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    I like number 2.

    Also the illusion in number 4 that the floor is actually a trampoline is pretty cool too only the rest of the editing isnt too good.

    Im new too and as a beginner i would say you have really good shots not sure what the pros would say.
     
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    vtf No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like most of the photos, here are the things I see.
    #1 her hand hides half her smile, but good pic to me . Crop tighter.
    #2 Looks good, maybe alittle over-exposed at the front.
    #3 Background is distracting to me especially the 2nd child.
    #4 Just can't get myself to like, sorry.
    Keep at it, looking forward to seeing more.
     

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