I'm not sure if this works better as a B&W?

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  1. altyfc

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    Not the best of pictures, but would nevertheless be interested to hear what you think...

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    Here's the original colour version (slightly modified from the very original).

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    i dont think it looks too good in black and white
     
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    The color version is way better, but try to clone out that red dot in one of the lower windows. It's very distracting. Nice shot, though!
     
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    Color for sure.. the white and wood is nice. Again clone out the dot :)
     
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    color is way better for sure,
    gives more prespectives to the building abstract.
     
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    Thank you for the feedback. Here it is with the red sticker removed.

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    removing the sticker was a good move. the color contrasted with the white is really great. i really like the shot!
     
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    I noticed the sticker at the time of taking the shot and there was obviously not a lot I could do about it at that stage. I am curious as to why it was there at all, as there was nothing on it... it was just a plain, red sticker. :)
     
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    It kinda looks like someone put it there in MS Paint or something.
     
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    I assure you I didn't do that. :D
     
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    I prefer the color one!
     
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    I'd suggest a black border around the image. That would balance it out a bit, now it looks to me as if the image is gonna leak all over the page
     

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