In Need of your Constructive Feedback!

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MyaLover, Dec 18, 2008.

  1. MyaLover

    MyaLover TPF Noob!

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    So how am I doin?

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  2. ryan7783

    ryan7783 TPF Noob!

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    All of them look good but I really like 2 and 4, Mya - very professional looking. Do you shoot for a company or just as a hobby?
     
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    I like the very desaturated and cold tones.

    #2 and #4 are my favorites but the shiny/grain effect is a bit too apparent in my opinion, maybe more in #4 because the effect is very evident in the shadow areas of the hair. The eyes are really nice, very bright and surrounded by very dark area. I think they would stand out even more in #4 if it wasn't from the distracting shiny effect. The darker shadow on the left shoulder could be brighten up a bit also to make the face stand out even more.
     
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    MyaLover TPF Noob!

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    Thank you both for the feedback! I shoot mainly as a hobby, I do a lot of TFP stuff with local models/actors/entertainers/designers though
     
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    Every time I check one of your post you seem to be progressing more and more. These remind me of fancy desktop wallpapers with some surreal effects. Some may thing its too much effects but I think you can push it more but thats just depends what feel your looking for. I for one would wish you had a gun and dressed like a sexy mafia girl so I can make a new game banner for my little online game with your permission of course. :)
     
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    Hahahahahaha maybe Ill see what i come up with... stay tuned
     

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