in the park

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by steve_sydney, Jul 2, 2005.

  1. steve_sydney

    steve_sydney TPF Noob!

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    Hey all, I know this type of pic has been done a million times before... but let me know what you think anyways.

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    Hi Mate, The picture has been well taken, but for me it really doesn't do much. Ernie
     
  3. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    good colour matey abd good shot - but i think you critiqued correctly when its been done before. If you decide to redo the shot here are some ideas:

    1. use the leaves to form a makeshift trail to the girl in the corner
    2. add twist of unsuspecting action ie, a little kid about to drop a water ballon on the subject, or a midflight football about to land on the sleeping beauty
    3. Have the girl dress in red (contrasting colours with the green)

    just some thoughts, thanks for sharing mate!
     

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