Industrial C&C please

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by einsamflicks, Aug 3, 2009.

  1. einsamflicks

    einsamflicks TPF Noob!

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    The Front Door

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    Sparky


    I never know wether or not my crops are good or not, I would really love your criticism.
     
  2. Samanax

    Samanax TPF Noob!

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    Sorry, neither image does anything for me...they're kinda boring.
     
  3. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Crop #2 from just below the #4 on the helmet to just above the stray spark on the bottom right. Will focus on the action and be a little better composition, me thinks.
     

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