Industry in winter

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    hi :)
    so I haven't posted here in a few weeks... so now I go on with this one. taken today during a photoshoot with other photogs from my city. we got access to the harbour only for 2 hours. this is a pano stiched from 5 photos. I did a b&w conversion only and played with levels and a few other things... I need a honest criticque on this one.. but I didn't post it in critique gallery coz I dunno what I want critiqued here :)

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    Mentos you did a good job of capturing the sun and not loosing the detail in the bg. Good job :thumbup:
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Ooooooo! I like this!
    It looks icy cold (wonder why, don't YOU? ;)), and I love the angle you chose and the point of view! Is it a vignetting that just happened by pointing the camera in the direction of this bright sun? Anyhow: I like it here! And I like how you push your actual topic, your motif, the "industry", into the background. Very cool.
     
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    yep, I had problems with vignietting because it is a pano and vignieting was visible on every single picture. so I made "more" pictures to overlay them and to cover vignieting. the one which you see above, the vignieting in the corners are original.
     
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    This is great.
     
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    Great shot, is the horizon level though? Looks about 1.2deg clockwise rotation would fix it?

    Love the vignetting and the icey bits, and the cranes. I might try cropping a little foreground, but I'm not sure.

    Rob
     
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    Great job on the stitching Mentos. I cannot tell that you did that at all. Lots of nice detail here too....Nice job!! : )
     
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    I thought so when I first saw the picture in full size. but then when I tried to rotate it I saw that it is barrel distortion caused by wide angle and stitching all the shots toghether. If you look closely on the left side, you will notice that there's a curve too :)

    but what about the composition and contrast?! I need more feedback :) There's a chance that this photo will be exhibited in a photo gallery!
     
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    i like it, but i would also like to see a colour version :thumbup:
     
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    heyyyyyy thats very neat.....
    u've handled the light very well....love the compo.....
     
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    *bump
    sorry for this :) I just need more feedback from you :)If you don't like it just write it down! but say why :p thanks
     

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