informal portrait attempt

[Nytmair]

hmmm... for me it's a toss up between the semi-desaturated shot and the B/W shot... i can't decided :scratch:

 

[Canon Fan]

Here is what I had after a few minor tweaks :scratch:

 

[Nytmair]

that looks pretty good! i like how she is more offset to the right rather than centered and with it, and having her legs cut off in this one also helps the pic out... not sure how, but i like it better :LOL:

 

[green]

to me she looks uncomfortable. not having her legs in the picture does help that.

 

[photong]

No offence but is that a guy or girl? I assume a girl because of the hair. I know it's an informal portrait, but her pose is masculine. It makes her look like a dude Especially the look on her face.

I don't like the full colour *puke* I love it in BW. For me, it takes away the distraction of the pose.