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  1. Leigh Wanstead

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    Compose by two photos one is the sunset cloud photo. What do you think the composition?

    TIA

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    Has the feel of a graphic arts poster. that's about all I'm qualified to say about it but i like it.
     
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    The colours look too candy and the orange blotches take away from the picture. I like the composition and subject aside from the elbow. Can we see it with no post processing?
     
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    i don't like it. not sharp, busy, noisy, bad color.
     
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    I like the image without the clouds added in. How did you do that by the way?
     
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    The image without the clouds seems not so colorful, too boring. I like color:wink:

    I lense blur the person in the seagull image to void some distraction. I changed the curve of this image.
    I change the mode of the cloud photo to combine these two photo.
     
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    with a few adjustments you can make the original more colourful. Do you mind if I attempt to do so and repost it?
     
  9. Leigh Wanstead

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    Thanks

    Look forward to your imagination:wink:
     
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    After a few adjustments in photoshop:
    [​IMG]

    and i forgot to crop out the elbow.
     
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    Negative, you a great job on that picture... I'm sorry, Leigh but the original is way to saterated for my tastes, and adding the clouds just adds to the distraction.
     
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    Hmmmm....I think it is just too busy. I liked the blur as it showed what appeared to be quite the frenzy. I also think I liked the original sans all the color saturation.

    The clouds are very cool....very ominous
     

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