Inside the Pantheon, Paris

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  1. Garbz

    Garbz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Requesting critique on this one. Trying something new. Rather than a direct shot of some of art around the building I was aiming to show some of the dynamic lighting and rounded architecture.

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    Thanks for looking.
     
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    with a little bit of selective dodging (don't go HDR on it, just a little more subtle detail) on the lefthand column, and maybe cleaning up the flare at the top, this shot would be stellar Garbz.
     
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    I agree. Wonder if anything can be done about what looks like a plastic tarp or cover in the top left corner... De-emphasize it in a vignette maybe?
     
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    Yeah I tried to crop it out a bit. Thanks for the suggestions. I don't have photoshop with me on my holiday so I'll get into those ideas in a few weeks.
     
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    I quite like the little bit of flare. I agree about bringing out a touch more details in the shadow.
     

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