intertwine- C&C please.

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  1. rhall54

    rhall54 TPF Noob!

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    Tell me what you think please.

    This picture also inspired a poem.

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    Very nice shot
     
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    This is nice. Great subject, good exposure.
     
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    rhall54 TPF Noob!

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    thank you!
     
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    Well, since you asked for C&C...I really don't think the subject is all that interesting. Maybe a smaller crop would help focus in on the leaf? You should write us the poem!
     
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    thank you. I'll have to go back and see how a smaller crop looks!

    and I sent you the poem. not too sure how many people would want to read it lol. :)
     
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    I can say that your title is perfect for your subject. And your shot I think is just Perfect!
     
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    thank you so much!!
     
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    Looks kinda like an upside down heart...great subject!
     
  10. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Too many distracting elements to the left and the right of your intended subject, I think, maybe a vertical crop would help bring out the leaves and twig some more. Other than that: nice one!
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Good eye; agree with the others that the perimeter isn't adding to the image however. I'd suggest a tight crop on the main subject.
     

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