Into Water

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  1. MyaLover

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    A few shots, C&C as always, one attempt, more attempts to come. I learned a lot in this shoot and I cant wait to do it again, hopefully keep improving

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    I like the first two the best. The others seem really busy and cluttered. Really cool idea though.
     
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    Love the concept, can you put them up in colour too? Would like to see why you chose black and white over colour.....
     
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    Heres a couple with a blue filter:

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    And a color one with some obvious PP:
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    Fascinating set of photos, I like them all incl the colour one.....they have a creepiness about them, deathly if you like. They remind me of sirens in fantasy movies, excellent....I hope you explore this set-up further as some refinement could produce outstanding results.
     
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    Oh believe me this is one attempt, many many more to come because this one was fun and I really enjoyed the outcome, but I know they can be improved. This was a test and I loved it so there will be more
     
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    Number 2 is fave!
    love all the variations
     
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    Thank you for the kind words!!!
     
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    needs less B&W and more color. everything seems to be running together
     
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    Better? Worse? Yey? Nay?

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    this last shot is killer, it works compositionally and the colour is just right I think. I like the way the contours of the material flow with your body and your hand pulling the end is a nice touch. Overall for me the image has an erotic edge but not vulgar, good achievment. My only crit would be the slightly too dark area at the bottom of the image.....and maybe your eyes open to keep the creepy/ghostly edge in there.
     
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    I think it would look a bit more ethereal if your skin was a little desaturated on the last shot. Interesting set otherwise!
     

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