Introducing W/First Pics

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Project 6, Jan 19, 2009.

  1. Project 6

    Project 6 TPF Noob!

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    Hey Guys...Just wanted to intro myself. Project 6 AKA Mark Anthony. Obviously new n just started getting into photography. Here's some pics I took. Please C&C! Thanks

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    Samanax TPF Noob!

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    Your watermark is too big...it's distracting and it's taking attention away from the rest of the image. Should be smaller and more subtle.

    #1 - It's a nice scene but it's tilting to the right (or appears to be). What did the G10 focus on? The bench is really soft. The hedges in the foreground look in focus but was that the main subject of this picture?

    #2 - I like how you got in close to the subject. Image seems a little soft. Nice colors.

    #3 - I like that you got in close with this picture too, but there appears to be some camera shake. Lots of noise in this one.

    #4 - Nice B&W conversion but could use a little more contrast. Appears to have some camera shake in this one too. Cute dog.

    Nice set of images. Good start.
     
  3. Project 6

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    Watermark to big-Check
    #1-I never noticed that it was tilting to the right..probably is because i used the tripod on snow.
    #2-to soft- Check
    #3-What exactly is noise?
    #4- more contrast-check..thanks thats Dexter its my girls dog.

    Thanks for the Helpful feedback!!
     
  4. Jaszek

    Jaszek No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hahah Ok...Thanks Jaszek
     

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