Inviting yet Aloof (Rockport 3 of ??)

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  1. manaheim

    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I'm not sure... I found this scene appealing. Was it just me?

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  2. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Could be.

    The (supposed) white of the flag has a yellow cast when compared to the hanging pot. Now, I realize it could be due to a numbers of factors, but that doesn't excuse the lost detail.

    I'd remove the spot in the third pane on the right, top row of the door. The blind control in top left pane is acceptable, but not necessary.

    The star on the short rail...... pfft.

    I feel the hanging plant and pot are overexposed.

    IMO, what would make this interesting is to have had a face peering out of the dark space of the opened door.

    The time of day may not have been your best friend.

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  3. ztriola

    ztriola TPF Noob!

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    yeah hdr would work well for this if you are determined to make this work and a re-shoot is possible. i think its interesting.
     
  4. manaheim

    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yyyyyyyeah I struggled a bit with the exposure. There's a big range in there. The white on the flag is an "aged" white, so it's not supposed to be pure white. I concur on the overexposure being unacceptable. Maybe I should play with it to darken it and see what it comes out like. The details in the flag thing were awfully nice, too.

    Good points. I didn't consider doing any cloning. This was a quick edit to see how folks reacted because I was on the fence.

    :lol: Well, I didn't put it there. :lol: I actually thought the star was kinda cute... what did you pfft at it for, specifically? (genuinely curious)

    Well, see, if there were a face peering out then the picture would be all blurry because I would have run away terrfied. :lol:

    But yes, I agree.

    No, it was fricken awful... sun right above our heads pretty much.

    HAHAHAHAH!!!

    It's all good. You gave me exactly what I needed. Thank you!
     

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