Is this shot any good?

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  1. SlimPaul

    SlimPaul TPF Noob!

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    Hey,

    I kinda like this shot but I'd like to hear others opinion. Is this shot any good, can I improve it in any way?

    Thanks, Paul

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    I think a naked chick walking on the steps would improve it, other than that it's got some nice technical aspects going for it.

    Not something I'd hang on a wall or use as a desktop picture, but it's different. I might grunge it up a bit, that's all I can think of right now.
     
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    No image. Says "This photo is currently unavailable."
     
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    /Imraging
     
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    What about now?
     
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    kinda boring imo
     
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    Technically it's a good photo I guess you could say, has leading lines and it's symmetric, however just because it's technically good doesn't mean it's going to be interesting. The lighting is kind of dull and after all it's just a set of stairs. However I do feel it has potential...
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I think it would work better cropping down from the top to only one flight of stairs. For a second (IMO) more interesting, squarish image, crop that exactly in half and pick a side.
     
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    I—for one—think this is pretty darn cool. Then again, I'm in a mood where I like simplicity right now.

    The major, major problem with this image is the barrel distortion that hasn't been corrected. That really, really needs to be fixed-up before it looks stable and symmetrical. As it is, the lines are slightly curved, which may be detracting from the image's aesthetic appeal.
     
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    Some flash could have made the lighting more interesting.
     
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    No!
     
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    robertwsimpson No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    [​IMG]

    I had a go at it, hope you don't mind...
     

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