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  1. *~*AshleyRenae*~*

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    Better? I just took it.

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    You need to smile! lol.

    Good focus, not bad on the lighting. Overall a pretty good shot! :)
     
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    Thank you, lol I guess I'm not the smile type. :p
     
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    Just curious: what are you shooting with? Oh and generally it's not considered flattering to look up someone's nose.







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    Not into flattering anyone really just trying to get the eyes right, thank you though and it's a Kodak ES Z812 IS. Don't really know much about it just yet, just got it not long ago with all the lenses and filters.
     
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    Well congrats on the camera. And I meant that it's not flattering to you. But if you're just practicing with the eyes...they look good to me. They seem sharp and you've got the catchlights, so well done. Just as a portrait, it could do with some tweaking.





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    The eyes are great. I would like to see a little bit of a smile. Much too pretty not to have a smile. By the way, welcome to the Forum!
     
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    Thank you much! Yeah smile....hehe it's on the list. :)
     
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    I like the shot, but it seems to be a tiny bit underexposed. The lighting and focus are pretty good. You've got really great eyes, by the way.
     
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    Thank you! :)
     
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    Well, the eyes are great! Your expression is somewhere between sensual and tottaly lost :mrgreen:. The photo is underexposed, here is a quick auto-contrast in PS to show you how it should look like (if you are not going for some special look):

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    Now, what's the deal with the blurry parts? Hiding something perhaps? Ask around and have a look for skin retouching tutorials ;)
     
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    Actually yes I had glitter all over my face.
     

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