It has been a while. C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by shmne, May 22, 2010.

  1. shmne

    shmne No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It has been quite some time since I got out and shot something for me, I've been working for a cookie cutter photography company to make some extra money on the side.

    Last night I told my girlfriend to get prettied up and that we'd go out and just take some photos of her, this is the only one I really liked from the lot of them. I used my vivitar 285 flash and a bounce card (20x20 square foam core) just around the street here. 50mm lens and the settings were basically studio settings (f/11 @1/200th shutter 100iso)

    Anyway, enough yatta yatta and here it is:
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  2. er111a

    er111a TPF Noob!

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    its hard to see the black hairband besides that i like it
     
  3. Sebastian Riel Ph.

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    Sorry she looks to serious :(
     
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    Raizels TPF Noob!

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    I find it interesting. It's bright without being overexposed - you can see the texture of her skin and lips. All except for her nose.... :/
    Her expression is a bit sullen, bu the dilated pupils keep her from looking unfriendly.
    The only thing I would suggest is bglure out the acne scars (is that what it is?) near her ear.
     
  5. PerfectlyFlawed

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    shadow on her nose bugs me...also she seems over exposed, imo. the left side of her hair is lighter than the other.. the way the light hit it.. i dont know if that matters.. just something i noticed.
     

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